This is the honest to gods truth... I don't like giving specific advice on maps because I want the maker to be free from too much influence, but I was totally thinking...
DO NOT MAKE THE JUMP FROM BR TO OUTSIDE RAISED HALLWAY POSSIBLE -- and it that is exactly what happened. Weird.
I was going to instead perhaps suggest to lower the ramp, but what was done will suffice. Seems a very good decision IMO! Seems much improved to me, but of course, this is just theory crafting.
What do you think of the map now, compared to the early iteration? Have games improved or gotten worse?